I need feedback on my game

Hi I am creating a game from scratch on GDevelop. The details are below. Please play it and fill out the given form so i can improve it.

Game Title: Claymaker of Saidpur

Playable Link:

Platform: Web (for now)

Description: Claymaker of Saidpur is a calm, story-focused point and click puzzle game set in Saidpur Village, Pakistan. I’ve made it with hand-drawn digital art, inspired by the textures, colours and stories of the place. The game follows the fictional story of a clay potter who, 120 years ago, built a clay train using nothing but imagination and the earth around him. His story isn’t shown in the game, but it shapes the world you explore now. As you move through the village, you solve small puzzles, find clues, and discover bits of his life and legacy. The whole game is meant to highlight traditional values, local craft, and the calm feeling of exploring an old village full of memories. It’s made for a niche audience that enjoys slow, gentle games that focus more on atmosphere and discovery than action.

Free to Play Status:

  • Free to play
  • Demo available

Involvement: I made this game from scratch. Also this is my first time making a game.

Please fill out this form after you play the game:

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Is your game support on mobile? (formal question)

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Not yet. Right now its web based, you can still play on mobile through web, but you will have to play on landscape mode.

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nice! i will do the form later.


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Hi …I’m a clay maker by day, and so I love the idea of this one. All the questions in the survey seem to relate to how well you know Saidpur - I’ve never been there! but it looks like a nice place.
I love the art style and the animation Is great. I’ve done a similar animation with a composite character before and so I appreciate the work here.
There needs to be more content, dialogue options etc, but clearly this would be a big project…you could put years into this one. As a clay maker, what I’d love to see is some clay making. Like maybe some work on a potters wheel …maybe using shape painter and a pot shape drawn using an array of points that get changed by the mouse position etc. Or bashing a lump of clay into shape using ‘marching squares’ extension.
All the best with this one - good work!

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Thankyou so much for your feedback it really made my day! I am so glad you liked the idea of the game. Its okay if you haven’t been to Saidpur, honestly thats just for my research.
I would definitely like to add some clay making in the game too but yes maybe in the future sometime. I’ll be sure to check out the methods you’ve recommended!
Thanks once again!

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Hi @banana_bread_1!

Good and original game.
I answered to the survey.
You can completely trust PetLimpet because it is an expert with Shapes.

Good continuation.

A+
Xierra

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what’s chai?
(20 words i hate feature saying post must be 20 words)

Chai is a spiced tea blend traditionally made with black tea, milk, and a mixture of spices such as cardamom, cinnamon, ginger, and black pepper.

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that sounds dellicous

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I never had a “chai” before.

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I think its tea or coffe

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nice, this is cool, would be great if you launch in app version.

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